Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this flows so nicely now.

I can think of seven dirtier applications at this very moment.

Is "dirty" the right word? Maybe "much more interesting"? For someone with his, ah, hobbies, he's probably not going to think of these inventive TC applications as especially dirty.

Wait wait one more nitpicking -- would her leaving be more convincing if they had a little more chemistry? If she actually had second thoughts for a moment? Even Pepper Potts--however briefly--has moments of "Damn, I want thatttttttttttt". Maybe it's there already and I'm missing it.