It's just a frussssstrating story to read. They don't get together, even though she likes him. Were they to get together, obviously he would be no good for her and it wouldn't last. BLEH! I don't like the stories where the girl goes off with the guy she doesn't love for the sake of "sensibility".
Personal preference, however.
Maybe I've read too much Mervyn Peake, but how about more description? I kind of had the cheatsheet from when we talked on Facebook, but otherwise there's really no way to tell what time period (80's? Modern? Far-flung future?). I am addicted to adjectives, though, so I'll stop twitching like a heroin addict on your street corner.
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Date: 2009-05-28 10:46 pm (UTC)From:It's just a frussssstrating story to read. They don't get together, even though she likes him. Were they to get together, obviously he would be no good for her and it wouldn't last. BLEH! I don't like the stories where the girl goes off with the guy she doesn't love for the sake of "sensibility".
Personal preference, however.
Maybe I've read too much Mervyn Peake, but how about more description? I kind of had the cheatsheet from when we talked on Facebook, but otherwise there's really no way to tell what time period (80's? Modern? Far-flung future?). I am addicted to adjectives, though, so I'll stop twitching like a heroin addict on your street corner.