Date: 2009-05-29 06:05 pm (UTC)From: [identity profile] emily
Ooh. I like this.

I read it backwards, of course, because the ending is much more interesting than the beginning, but I don't think I lost much for comprehension that way.

I loved: “She was too smart to be lured by either of us ... Men who wanted her only after isolation together had done its trick.”

That feels very real and understandable to me. Though it's slightly alarming that a guy makes the conclusion, I'm glad it's in there.

Dude, I so wish I could relate to a heroine going through life being perfectly chaste but leaving a string of embittered lovers in her wake. *^_^*

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